Mr. Right, Mr. Wrong, Mr. Alien : A Sci-Fi short story romance

Writing A Sci-Fi short story romance

I’ve been wanting to write a short story for some time.  This is a new endeavour, I’m used to pumping out 100K words.  Tackling 3-5K was daunting.  How would I express my H/h ‘s goals, motivations, and conflicts?  How would I create their character arcs?  I kept the concept in the back of my mind, but I didn’t know how or where to start.

A Sci-Fi short story romance

Be careful what you wish for


Until I saw this cover at  Continue reading

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The Plot Thickens Outlining

This is an excerpt from “The Plot Thickens:21 Ways to Plot Your Novel“, written by me and my wildly creative partner, Jack Monroe.
The Plot Thickens
Love It or Hate It, It’s Time to OutlineIt’s time to outline your story.  I’m a big fan of outlining; it helps me stay organized and focused, and keeps me drifting off subject.
Your outline should be a living, breathing document, able to change as inspiration and your characters take you in new directions.
You’re going to spend a lot of time on your outline, tweaking it until order starts to take shape.  Don’t be discouraged; it’s all worth it in the end.
First, brainstorm the heck out of your story.  Nothing is off limits, nothing is a stupid idea.  Write down all the elements you want to appear in your novel—the characters, their situations, the setting.  Once you feel you’ve exhausted your imagination, start funneling your ideas into something more manageable by writing a summary, an abbreviated version of the main body of work.

Some of the things to consider:

  • Who is your main character?  What happened in his back-story to shape him and prepare him for his challenge?  Some authors make a complete character sketch for their major players.  Some choose pictures, write bios, or create a vision board.  Use whatever you’re most comfortable with to get a handle on your characters.
  • What conflicts will they face in the novel and how will they solve them?  Remember, their problems will move the story.
  • What are their motivations to accept the challenges they’ve been presented?
  • What are they trying to achieve (their goals)?  Their goals, motivations, and conflicts should be internal as well as external.
  • Where is it set?  Build your fictional world.

Now list the plot points, the major milestones your character has to experience to get him to the end of the story.  Use the Hero’s Journey section of this book to define them.
These plot points will become your scenes.  Each scene must have a purpose.  Something has to happen which drives the story forward.  It will produce a change molded by conflict.
Summarize each scene in a few sentences.  Use index cards, Post-Its, an Excel spreadsheet or (my favorite) Scrivener, to organize them.
Elements of a scene:

  • Who is in the scene?
  • Where does it take place?
  • Whose point of view is used?
  • Do the decisions made by the character move him closer or further from his goal?
  • Do your subplots tie into the main story?
  • Does your character suffer and grow and change until he can’t go back to the way he was at the story’s beginning?

You probably have an idea of how long you want your novel to be.  Using the three or four act structure, break your estimated word count into the appropriate sections.  Place your “must-have” scenes where you think they should fit in the overall structure.  Take a step back.
Believe it or not, you’ve just outlined your novel!  Don’t be surprised if you deviate from it.  Characters have a habit of taking over, but you’re in the driver’s seat!
Congratulate yourself and start writing!

The Plot Thickens:21 Ways to Plot Your Novel is available as a FREE Kindle Unlimited book!


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How to add depth to the characters you write by using their birth order

Birth Order

Birth Order

How birth order affects your characters

We all know the cliches of the spoiled baby of the family or the tyrant older sister.  Why not use this information to drive your characters through your story?

In “Birth Order, Adding Depth to the Characters You Write,” I examine the strengths and flaws of each child of a family’s hierarchy (now grown for your plotting purposes). If you’ve wondered why your hero is a leader, a clown or a negotiator, the answer might be in where his birth order lies.

The last section looks at the romantic relationships between the different birth orders.  Do you want your hero and heroine to clash?  Make them both first-borns.  If your heroine has older brothers, how does her status affect her relationship with the hero, who is the youngest of his clan?

A truncated version of this information was presented as a workshop to my writing group, Grand Rapids Region Writers Group.

Happy writing!




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